Steps for my first draft-Intro

We can easily hear news about animal tests in our daily life. Recently, there was a news about the success of making ebola virus vaccine by a help of animal test. Like this, animal tests can benefit human life.However, many animals are suffering by cruel animal tests. Not many of us know truly about the present condition of animal test. In my essay, I'd like to argue that animal tests should be regulated

1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by telling the news about animal test related with ebola virus, which is a hot potato now.

2. Explains the topic -
I told the audience that I'd like to talk about the bad side of the animal test.


3. My thesis -
My argument -animal test should be regulated- is clearly shown in the last part.