2014년 11월 16일 일요일

First draft (late)

  A lotion that has soft texture like custard cream gives moist to skin, and a cheery-red color lipstick makes a smile. But have you ever thought that sacrifice of animals follows to the birth of cosmetics? Most people does not care whether animal test was held or not to make cosmetics when buying it. It is not important than the skin(which is not even 1mm). When people rage by the fact that 80thousand of dogs are being abandoned per year, no one much cares about the death of animals(4million per year) used in tests. Like this, not many people cares seriously about animal tests or does not truly know about the present condition of animal tests. However, we need more critical view to see through it. There are surely problems in animal testing and it should be regulated. 
  To start with, it is important to know what exactly animal test is. Animal test is an experiment or a procedure that animals are used as subjects for a scientific purpose such as education, research or produce of biological products. Animal tests are held in various ways. In medical or biology field, animals are used to study about genetic features, growing process and behavior pattern by being dissected. But, the purpose of an animal test people usually think is to check the effect or safety of a new product. It is held for not only medical products but also cosmetics, food or pesticides. Generally, various kinds of animals are used in animal test including livestock, wild animals, from protozoa to mammals. Animals currently used in animal tests are about five hundred million per year.(Peter Singer, [Animal Liberation]).  
  The prevalence of animal test has made a new kind of creature called ‘laboratory animal’. Generally, to make the research result approved, a same experience should make same result in any time or in any place. But, in case of animal test that uses living creatures, different result may be shown due to the difference of genetic matter or posses of illness. Therefore it is hard to estimate the cause. To prevent this and to higher the credibility and reproducibility, various kinds of lab animals are mass producted. Methods to produce animals that show same reaction to certain condition helps this. Representative animals are mouse, rat, guinea pig, hamster, rabbit or certain kinds of dogs and cats.
  Some might think that animal tests started in modern times. But, surprisingly, origin of animal test dates back to ancient greek era. Hippocrates(BC460~BC377) introduced reproduction and heredity by animal dissection. Aristoteles(BC384~BC322) also developed anatomy and embryology by observing animals. A surgeon of Rome, Galenos(Claudios Galenos, 129~199) is known for defining medical facts about heart, bone, muscle and nerve system by dissecting monkey, goat and pig. 
   After 19th century, animal test helped scientists and doctors in the field of toxicology and physiology. But, while animal tests developed medical science and biology, people objecting animal tests increased. For example, Charles Darwin(1809~1882) is well known for making ‘Cruelty to Animals Act’ in 1876, which is a law regulating animal tests. Darwin admitted that animal test can be useful in physiology, but thought that it can not be justified. Further, the problem of animal test was known to the public in early 1900s by the ‘brown dog affair’, which is an affair that legality debate between medical students and animal vivisection objectors was held due to the Professor of London university Vail Reese act, dissecting a brown terrier in psychology lab. 
   Now, it’s time to see some inconvenient truths. A regular lab animal for safety of tooth paste is an opossum. Testers check whether there is an irritation by squeezing tooth paste in its’ cheek. Opossum’s cheek is stitched up for two weeks. Rabbits are used for eye safety test. Testers input cosmetic in rabbits eye without any anesthesia. Rabbits can’t move, and its eyes are fixed with clips. Some rabbits struggle due to the enormous pain and it leads to the break of neck or backbone. An experiment called ‘LD50’ is an experiment that gradually increasing the amount of certain chemical matter until 50% of lab animals die. No anesthesia is used because the amount of pain is also an important observation list. Lab animals die after vomit, convulsion, diarrhea, paralysis, and other uncountable pains. Rabbit that was tested with mascara more than 3000 times die after being blind. So then, would these animals death necessary?
  To tell the conclusion first, it is not. Animal test has no good for both animals and humans. There are some reasons why it should be regulated.
  Firstly, animal tests are not safe. According to professor ‘Chang-Kil Park’, he says that the result of animal test can not be adjusted directly to humans. For example, he said “Tylenol is safe to humans, but it is a fatal toxin to rabbits. On the contrary, thalidomide, which was safe to animals for cure of morning sickness made pregnant women born deformed child. This is a well known incidence that represents unsafety of animal tests.” Diseases that both humans and animals share is only about 1.16%. In USA a hundred thousand of people die after taking medicine that is supplied after animal test. Ralph Heywood from Huntington lab revealed that the prediction of animal tests is only about 5~25%. “If animal test is really trustworthy result, why test again to human after the animal test?” says professor Park.
  Second, animal test is against ethics. Animal has their rights, and we humans has no stronger power to ignore that right. Consider the pains animals get by various tests. When people know about the serious condition of animal test, they will no more call out the necessary of animal test. Moreover, using animals for the profit of human is not right. Killing the same precious life as humans can not be accepted. When a creature that is powerful than human emerge, human beings will be tested just like animals humans now test.
  People who agree with animal test say that regulating animal test is not safety either. However, they are wrong. Then what can guarantee the safety? There are several ways that can replace animal test. For example, a popular cosmetic company. “Loreal” is now using artificial skins to test new cosmetics. Furthermore, in April,2012, Loreal made a lab that produces 13hundred thousand artificial skins and cornea cells, which are used to test the safety and effect of base material of cosmetics. Alternate technique that can reduce pain of animals is increasing. Amorepacific, a cosmetic company uses eggs or cornea of butchered cows to check the safety. Moreover, a computer simulation that predicts the effect of chemical material is actively used.
  Also, there are people who say that animal test is a necessary evil. However, it is not. The british government already regulated animal testing on cosmetics, and started a campaign. “The body shop” is a representative brand that led this campaign. The company labels ‘AAT(Against Animal Testing)’ on every products, and does not enters China, where wants animal test results. But people does not think that this company’s products are dangerous than other products that takes animal test. To add, in EU, cosmetics that went through animal test even though there are alternative tests are prohibited to be sold in Europe since 2009. 
  There can be cases that animal tests are need. There are obviously testers and scientists that thanks to the sacrificed lives and tries to test in humane ways. I’m not trying to criticize those who are not. It is a scolding to an unethical act that gives pain to a life for beauty and own profit. It is also an appeal about the anxiety to the safety of animal tests. One by one, if people does not use products that went through animal tests, more brands and companies will avoid animal tests. Quoting the words of Jane Goodall, I'd like to urge the regulation of animal tests. “We think it is unavoidable to sacrifice animals for the progress of science or happiness of human. But there is nothing like ‘unavoidable’. By approaching in various sights and finding alternatives ways, both human and animal can be happy”


                        Reference


http://www.navs.org/page.aspx?pid=402

 
 
 

2014년 10월 26일 일요일

Research2

What if somebody tests your eye?




http://news.naver.com/main/read.nhn?%20mode=LSD&mid=sec&sid1=102&oid=028&aid=0002174667

My topic: Animal tests should be regulated.


What I hope to learn from this source:
I wanted to know how many animals are killed every year. Also, I could find some specific steps of cruel animal tests. Moreover, I wanted to know what kinds of animals are used in animal tests.

I want to know the positive effects of laughter. How does laughing affect positively to human?Is false laughter also positive?

Notes:
  1. the title of this article : what if somebody tests your eye?
  2. One hundred million animals are killed by animal tests 
  3. Rats are killed by breaking their backbone after tests.-seen by 신승철, the researcher of catholic life ethics lab
  4. We should first stop using animals on tests for cosmetic products
    --animal welfare organization                                                                              
  5. ▶'3', '4' →animal tests are really cruel, and therefore many animal welfare organizations are trying for the animal rights
Final Thoughts:
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Steps for my first draft-Refutation and Concession

1. What is my thesis?
Animal test should be regulated.

2. What is the opposite position?
Animal test doesn't need to be regulated.

Steps for my first draft-Narration

My persuasive argument thesis is: 
Animal tests should be regulated.

1. What do people already know about my topic?

Many know that animal tests are now held very much. Everyone knows that animal tests have both bad and good effects on humans. Some people may have seen some pictures of animal tests.Everyone knows that computers are extremely powerful. Everyone knows they are vital to modern life. We have computers in our phones, watches, air-con and some of us have them in our bodies. People are exposed to sci-fi movies and books where computers take over the world and enslave people, so some people have an irrational fear about the future of computers. Also, even though we use computers so frequently, it should be noted that many people have no idea how computers really work. 

2. What research has already been done about my topic?

http://navercast.naver.com/magazine_contents.nhn?rid=1377&contents_id=47240
There has been a First animal test disagreeing expo.

mode=LSD&mid=sec&sid1=102&oid=028&aid=0002174667
I could find out how animals suffer through this news.

3. What are the implications of my argument (What if I'm right? What if I'm right and people ignore me?)

If people can be aware of the truth of the animal test, they will probably say that we should stop doing animal tests. If there were people who disagree with me, they might step back by admitting the side effects of animal tests. 

Steps for my first draft-Confirmation

1. What is my thesis?
Animal test should be regulated.

2. What types of source am I using to defend my thesis?
I am using the articles from reliable website, expert opinions, 
 
3. Are my arguments mostly based on evidence, logic or emotion?
My arguments are mostly based on logic and exact evidences found by research. I will use emotional appeals in my confirmation or in conclusion.


  First and foremost, animal test is against ethics.
R1 : Animal test is against ethics.
    -pain to animals
    -killing the same precious life as humans is not right

R2 :Humans should not test animals for their profits.
    -Animal testing because it is cheap is not right.
    -There are some alternative resources.

R3 : Animal tests are not safe.
    -only 1.16% same disease with human
    -different reaction on tests with human


Steps for my first draft-Intro

We can easily hear news about animal tests in our daily life. Recently, there was a news about the success of making ebola virus vaccine by a help of animal test. Like this, animal tests can benefit human life.However, many animals are suffering by cruel animal tests. Not many of us know truly about the present condition of animal test. In my essay, I'd like to argue that animal tests should be regulated


1. Attention grabber -
I attracted the audience by telling the news about animal test related with ebola virus, which is a hot potato now.

2. Explains the topic -
I told the audience that I'd like to talk about the bad side of the animal test.


3. My thesis -
My argument -animal test should be regulated- is clearly shown in the last part.

2014년 9월 10일 수요일

Research1


Research 1:The chimpanzee wanted freedom

Source:
http://blog.naver.com/hgne1234/40179528260

My Topic:
Animal tests should be regulated.

What I hope to learn from this source:
I wanted to find some data of animals that suffer by animal tests.
Notes:
  1. Oklahoma University in  USA taught a 15year old chimpanzee sign language to study the knowledge of it. For 4 years, chimpanzee learned sign language and learned about 250words.
    The first thing chimpanzee said was "Let Me Out"
  2. animals can surely suffer by tests without any freedom.
Final Thoughts:
 I thought this source can touch people's feeling by showing a poor life of a chimpanzee.
 Also, if somebody says that animals don't need freedom, I would use this example to refute them.